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2013年7月1日 星期一

C級評審感言

C級得獎創作中,有許多令人眼睛為之一亮的作品!充滿創意與奇想的的故事,搭配傳神幽默的四格漫畫,讀來令人捧腹大笑,也不得不佩服學生們的創意;透由學生們的眼睛看世界,不難發現這個世界處處充滿樂趣!然而事情總有一體兩面,仍然有許多作品並未對人物個性或事件重點做出具體描述,反而流於流水帳似的瑣碎紀錄,以致於作品缺乏故事性,標點符號大小寫也未加以留意,甚至有些作品繪圖略顯草率,白白浪費了一個好故事,這是此次尋找創作家活動中最令人惋惜之處!

2013年6月30日 星期日

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆萊斯特分校,Jerry 盧致瑋

My horrible dream
Last night, I played the computer games until very late. Therefore, I fell asleep on the desk. Suddenly, I was sucked by the computer to an unknown place. At first, I could see nothing , but then I wiped my eyes trying to see more clearly. There were a lot of tombs and corpses around me. After a few minutes, hundreds of zombies rose from their tombs trying to catch me. At this very moment, I woke up, and I realized it was only a nightmare. Next time, I would never play the games until very late

學校名稱:萊斯特分校
學生姓名:Jerry (盧致瑋)
就讀期數:S208
指導老師:Christine 陳佩玲
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆大雅分校,Linda 侯映伶

A Bad Habit
I liked to eat cookies and candy very much. Mom asked me to stop doing it, but I didn't listen. One day, I had a bad toothache. Mom checked my tooth and she said I got a cavity. Mom and Dad took me to a dentist. I lay on the chair , opened my month and waited for the doctor. Then he started drilling. I was so scared of the sound of the drill that it felt like a thousand years. After my tooth got fixed, I always brush my teeth after eating something. I never want to go there again!


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Linda Y. L. Hou(侯映伶)
就讀期數:S208
指導老師:Emily 張家慧
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆大雅分校,Isa 廖翊熏

A Funny Dream
Something funny happened yesterday afternoon. When I was taking a nap, I had a dream. When I opened the door, a dog barked at me and started chasing me. I ran for my life without looking carefully and then I bumped into a big tree and fell over. The dog ran toward me and bit my hand. It was so painful that I yelled, “Ouch!” Suddenly, I woke up and found my younger sister hitting on my head with a toy hammer and hitting my hand, too. Seeing this, I laughed out loud.


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Isa Y. H. Liao (廖翊熏)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Lynn 黃香蓮
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Cathy 詹可婕

Super T-C Penguin
This world is very lucky, because there is a cool hero called “Super T-C penguin”. She has X-ray eyes, a special watch and a power drink to make things small.
One day, Jeff gets lost in the forest! But Jeff is very lucky, because his friend is super T-C! Super T-C's watch says , “Beep! Beep!” So, Super T-C uses her x-ray eyes to find Jeff. First , she gives Jeff the Power Drink. Now, Jeff is very small and T-C Penguin takes him home. At home he grows bigger again. Finally, Jeff says, ”Let's have a party”. Everybody is so happy!!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Cathy K. C. Chan (詹可婕)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級四格圖畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Norman 陳詩孟

My Alien Friend
One morning, I woke up, I stretched my arms, but, saw Something very strange, I was on the moon!
This still wasn't the strangest thing, there was a monster! It was six meters tall, it had six hands, a huge mouth, that was the same size as my house!
After a while, I wanted to go home, He said, ”No!” If you go home, I will destroy the Earth!”. I said , “If you take me back, I will be your friend forever and you can visit me any time you want.” So , now I have an alien friend.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Norman Sh. M. Chen (陳詩孟)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆黎明分校,Rebecca 梁瑀珊

My dream
Everyone should have a dream, because the dream is to make you reach your goal, If a person does not have any goals, Things will be no progress. My goal is to be a famous baker. I want to make a lot of delicious bunsPiescakescookies…… for the poor children in the world. So that everyone can feel warm in their mind after eating my bread. No matter what your dream is big or small. As long as you have a clear goal , and put your efforts to achieve it You will be successful!


學校名稱:黎明分校
學生姓名:Rebecca Y. S. Liang (梁瑀珊)
就讀期數:S207
指導老師:Connie 楊媛茹
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Penny 蔡沛霓

An Embarrassment to My Mom One day, my mother and her work friends had lunch at a buffet restaurant. They enjoyed the meal very much. Then she found that there was a dish of delicious pasta on the counter. She quickly went to take it to her table. "Excuse me, lady. This is just a sample!" said a waiter. Oh! My mother put it back in a hurry! Luckily, nobody saw it.


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Penny P. N. Tsai (蔡沛霓)
就讀期數:S208
指導老師:Jenny
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Emma 張詠涵

Don't Litter
I think it is very bad to throw garbage on the floor because so many animals and plants will die. It can bring bad bugs like cockroaches and flies
One day I see a girl called Cathy, She throws her potato chips bag in the garden. I feel angry and say, “You can't throw garbage in the garden!” So I teach Cathy to care for the Earth.
Next, we work together and clean up all the garbage. Now, everything looks beautiful again.
I think people can throw garbage in garbage cans and recycle. I love my Earth!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Emma Y. H. Chang (張詠涵)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Sander 楊韶淵

Going to the moon.
Last night, I have a dream. My friend Carrol and I are going to the moon. I feel excited, because I can sit on the rocket and go super fast into the sky!
Our rocket has four round windows, it is tall and shiny, I like it very much. First, we get inside, then I push a big red button and up we go!
We hear the fire go, “Boom Boom” behind us! Now, we are in space, I can see the Earth, it looks so small, and I see the sun, it looks so big and not. Wow! I like my dream.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Sander Ch. Y. Yang (楊韶淵)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Eric 詹翔允

  My new super power
One day, I make delicious cookies. At night, the magical star changes them to the magical cookies.
When I eat the cookies, ”Bang! Bong!” I get a new super power! I can bring things to my hands just by using my brain power.
First, in the park I see a thief stealing a lady's bag, it's so terrible! I need to help her, so I get her bag back with my super power. She says,  ”Thank you, nice boy.”
Finally, I will keep my super power, because I want to help people around the world!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Eric H. Y. Chan (詹翔允)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆彰化中央分校,Tony 池東翰

The Balloons Accident   
It was a cool and windy day. Poor Guy Smile the balloon man, nobody bought a balloon from him Grover was so kind that he paid for all of the balloons. “Oh, no! ”
Everyone cried out loudly. Grover was blown up high in the sky! Just then, Grover got an idea. He popped the balloons one by one and landed safely to the ground. Hooray!!! The crowds cheered for him.


學校名稱:彰化中央分校
學生姓名:Tony T. H. Chin (池東翰)
就讀期數:S207
指導老師:Carina 劉莉萍
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆彰化中央分校,Zien 林亭節

 Quit Smoking
I know a young uncle, he smokes every day. Although, everybody seems to be his friend but no one likes him smoking. His teeth become yellow and smelly. One day, his decided to quit. Over the past months, he didn't smoke, his teeth became cleaner.
Wow! A year passed, uncle stopped coughing, and his body also became healthier.
After quitting, uncle did not only save the money to buy cigarettes, but also to have a healthy body with protection. Of course, we also began to talk to him, Oh! If you are smoking, please quit it as soon as possible.


學校名稱:彰化中央分校
學生姓名:Zien T.C. Lin (林亭節)
就讀期數:S208
指導老師:Michelle 賴怡瑄
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆彰化中央分校,Tommy 陳冠辰

 Free Cookies Forever
Do you know why Cookie Monster always has so many cookies to eat? One cool fall night, Cookie Monster felt very hungry. So he sat on the balcony and looked at the sky.
Suddenly, a huge cookie spaceship flew toward him. Cookie Monster was surprised him. Immediately, Cookie Monster held it and took a bite!
Some aliens ran out and begged him not to eat their spaceship. They promised to provide FREE cookies forever.


學校名稱:彰化中央分校
學生姓名:Tommy K.C. Chen (陳冠辰)
就讀期數:S207
指導老師:Carina 劉莉萍
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆清大分校,Tina 彭子庭

Coffee seeds
Today is a sunny day. I go out with my family. We want to plant the coffee seeds. ”Oh! It's so dirty!” my sister says. We see a big worm. My sister doesn't want to plant the coffee seeds. She wants to take a break. My brother wants to take a break, too. Now, my father is lonely. He is planting. He is crying.


學校名稱:清大分校
學生姓名:Tina T. T. Peng (彭子庭)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Ann 許孟婷
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆崇德分校,Jasmine 高卉蓁

Where Are My Eggs?
Oh, no! Where are my eggs? They aren't in my nest!” The hen said. So she went to ask her friend, Merry Duck. She said, “Do you see my egg?” Merry Dusk said, “No, I don't.” Next, she went to ask Betty Goose. She said, “Do you see my eggs? Betty Goose said, “No, I don't.” Then, she saw many chicks running to her and said, “Mommy!” She felt so happy to see her babies.


學校名稱:崇德分校
學生姓名:Jasmine H. C. Kao (高卉蓁)
就讀期數:S208-1
指導老師:Elynor 唐邦筠
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項