2013年7月1日 星期一

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,David 張維庭

Bert's Fantasy Adventure
One day, Bert got up early and went to school as usual.

When he walked by a large TV in a shop window, he looked at the game on it and said, “How I wish to be one of the characters! Then I wouldn't have to go to school every day. “As if by magic, he was sucked into the TV and his adventure began.

He looked around and found out that he was in a city There were many people and tall buildings. The name of the place was “The city of Dreams”.

They said that many people tried to do it, but nobody came back. After a few days, Bert was ready, so he set off his journey to save the mayor.

After traveling for a long time, he arrived at the terrifying forest they talked about. There were many monster s and dinosaurs which would eat anything alive.

Bert used the steel sword and fought with them bravely. He killed all of them and found a huge cave where the people who tried to save the mayor were locked up. They told him that he was kept somewhere else.

Two days later, Bert found the place which a large black bear guarded. He fought the bear and finally won.

The mayor thanked him a lot and promised to let his daughter marry Bert.

Though Bear was proud of what he had done, he wanted to go home. He went to the place where he landed and made a wish sincerely. “If I can get home, I will go to school every day and not complain anymore.”

With a flash, he got back to the street, in front of the TV in the shop window.

He knew that nothing was braver than facing his normal life and went to school happily.


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:David W. T .Chang (張維庭)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Lynn 黃香蓮

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

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