2013年7月1日 星期一

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆新竹北大分校,Eva 方星懿

Benjamin's Fancy Adventure

People always want what they don't have.

Benjamin is a naughty and full of imagination perch. He lives in a small pond with his family.

One day, Benjamin went out to play with his best friend, Clisa. He told her that he would like to go to the ocean. He wanted to see beautiful surfs and shells.

Time flew away, it was dark now. Clisa said goodbye to Benjamin and went home.

Benjamin's mother asked him to go home. Though he wanted to go to the ocean, he went home finally.

The next day, Benjamin went out by himself. He saw Mr. Frog. Benjamin told him he wondered to live on the land like him.

Mr. Frog said, “Are you joking?” Then Benjamin kept swimming.

After a while, he saw Mrs. Sea-fowl. He told her he wondered to go to the ocean.

Mrs. Sea fowl laughed at him and told him that the seawater is too salty for perches.

Then, Benjamin arrived at a river, he met Jimmy, a beaver. Jimmy invited him to have a delicious dinner and stay for a night.

The third day, Benjamin arrived at a tidal flat unconsciously. He saw a fish which looks almost the same as him. They made friends and kept swimming together.

Suddenly, a huge surd carried him to the ocean.

Benjamin felt scared and missed his family because ocean is too dark and deep. He asked a calm for help, but it was useless.

Benjamin felt helpless and uncomfortable because the seawater is too salty. Then he heard a beautiful voice.

“Why are you crying?” asked a gorgeous mermaid. Benjamin told her about his adventure, and she promised to help him.

Abruptly, a bigger surf than before carried him into the blue sky, He felt excited because he saw the fantastic beach.

The colorful shells shone in the sunshine.

Benjamin landed on the beach, but he was so dry that he was dying. Big Bird saw him and said, “Why are you here, perch?”, and helped him back to the river.

Benjamin just wants to stay with his family together forever now. He knows that his home is the best place in the world.

Cherish what you have is happiness.


學校名稱:新竹北大分校
學生姓名:Eva H. Y. Fang (方星懿)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Jessica 戴文寶

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

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