2013年7月1日 星期一

☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Cliff 郭志謙

Super Island
Once upon a time, there was an island called “The super Island “ There were so many different kinds of scary animals on it. Many people went there, but no one has every came back.

One day, there were three animals having a picnic in the mountain. They were a monkey a bear and a fox.

But on their way home. They were caught by some pirates.

The pirates took them to The Super Island and told them. “Your job is find all the gold and treasure for us, We will be back after three days If you don’t bring the treasure to us, we will leave you here and you can make friends with the monsters here.”

Off they went, left the monkey, the bear and the fox with a map of the island. They didn't know what to do and where to find the treasure.

The bear was thirsty. He suggested everyone to find some water and food so they have energy to find the treasure. The bear used his sensitive nose to find a big water fall. They all drank some water happily.
Suddenly, the water fall formed a big hole and swallowed them. When they woke up, they found themselves sitting by the water fall.

To their surprise. Everything was so big. They entered the giant world by going through the water fall. 

The trees were big The rocks were big. Even the flowers were big.

They saw many giant birds flying in the sky. They were scared that the birds in the sky would catch them and eat them, so they walked slowly and carefully.

After few hours, they came to a dark forest. Though the sun was big and shiny in the sky, they could hardly see anything.

Luckily, the clever monkey knew how to make torches and he did. In the forest, they saw many shadows moving around them. Suddenly, the fox saw a witch standing on a branch and saying get out of my island or you will be my evils servants like all the animals on this island” They realized that the animals here were very very scary was because they were bewitched.

So they started to flight. The fox dag a big hole and covered it with some grass and the bear quickly threw a big rock to the witch, but the witch was faster. She flew behind the bear and hit the bear with her broom, “Ya – hoo” The witch shouted.


學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Cliff C. C. Kuo (郭志謙)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項

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