2013年7月1日 星期一

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Marisa 劉妍慧

THE HAPPY KINGDOM

Along long time ago, there was a Snow king don. There was a king called Charming and a queen called Snow White. They had a child called Olivia.

Olivia was brave, but silly. Her hands had a magic power, that they could kill every evil person. One day, while Snow White was walking in the Dark forest, a wind blew and all the servants couldn't open their eyes. When they opened their eyes again. Snow White was gone.

The servants were very worried, so they quickly told King Charming about this. King Charming was very sad, so her got sick.

Olivia and her friend Jack knew about it , so they planned to find Snow White. They ran to the Dark forest. And found a big strange hole.

Olivia and Jack heard voices from the hole, so they just jumped in. It was dark there, so they had to walk slowly and carefully. After few minutes, Olivia was very tired, so she said to Jack, “ Jack. Can we take a break?”

While Olivia and Jack were resting, a huge snake crawled quickly and wanted to bite them. Olivia and Jack got scared and they ran quickly into the cave.

Suddenly, they saw light on their right hand side. They ran to the light and saw a kingdom.

Everything was purple in this kingdom. Even the castle was purple and there were many huge birds flying in the sky.

Olivia and Jack carefully walked into the castle. When they walked in, there was Purple Queen sitting on a purple chair. And next to her, they saw Snow White sitting in a big purple cage.

Olivia went to the cage and shouted to the Purple Queen, “Free my mother!!” She ran to the Purple Queen with a knife. But , the Purple Queen was fast.

Before Olivia could stab the Purple Queen. The queen held her hands to stop her. She didn't know the magic power of Olivia's hands.

Suddenly, she was on fire. She shouted loudly and busted into ashes. Olivia beat the queen with her magical hands.

Finally, Olivia and Jack found a key and opened the cage. Snow White, Olivia and Jack went to the Snow kingdom and everybody was so happy an had a bid party.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Marisa Y. H. Liu (劉妍慧)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

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