2013年7月1日 星期一

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Jenny 石宗諺

The Flying house

One morning, when John woke up. He felt so energetic. He finished his breakfast quickly and he went to work, but as soon as he walked out if the door. He found himself flying He felt very surprised, so he wanted to know why he was flying.

He looked every where around him. Surprising, he found a red and blue box next to his car. The box was shiny and beautiful. When he shacked the box, he could fly higher.

So he shacked the box so many times that he flew all the way up to the space. When he was in the space, he found that he could breathe in the space.

He saw many rocks and stars flying on the space. Suddenly, he saw a special rock. It was a blue and red rock. Then he larded on the rock.

He saw the same machine on that rock too. But it was much bigger. He also found if he pushed the box, the rock would move faster. If he pulled it, it would move slower. So he pushed it. The rock move faster and faster.

Then he saw a plant, it was all blue and red just like the box . Suddenly, he couldn't control it. The rock flew to the plant by itself.

When he landed he saw an alien. It was blue and it could speak English.

The alien sad: “Thank you for bringing the box back to us. The box actually chooses people who can control it. It chose toy, that means you are our friend. We will give you a trip in our plant.” The alien told him that he could get on their UFO, so off they went!

The UFO took him to the black plant. There were plants and oceans every where. But they didn't have any sun. Instead then had twelve moons.

He said: “I'm hungry. The alien quickly ran away and soon a bottle of give back. He tasted that. At first, it tasted sweet. Then it changed into salty. Then is sour and sweet. When he finish that. He felt very full.

The alien said, they had to get to another plant and they would take him to the Earth first, so he got back.

When he got home, he couldn't find his house anymore. He could only see a tall building instead. Then alien said: “One day in our plant is 100 years
 in your plant.”

學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Jenny C. Y. Shih (石宗諺)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


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