2013年7月1日 星期一

F級評審感言

F級得獎作品故事結構嚴謹,起承轉合連接得當,單字文法句型皆具水準,充份展示出F級學生的英文程度與心智成熟度,是所有創作中最具文字力的作品!但是仍有許多作品用字不當,包含過份艱澀以及語意不明,繪本製作草率,人物描繪過於簡略,僅以線條表示,整體內容結構鬆散等,以致於作品好壞懸殊過大,令人遺憾!期待下一屆的創作家們在推出作品之前,能夠謹慎行事,能將最好的故事,最棒的繪本製作呈現在大家的面前,如此也才不辜負比賽之名!

E級評審感言

E級得獎作品極具創意,特別表現在繪本的製作上,不僅色彩鮮豔,學生們更是運用立體書的表現手法,讓人每翻開一頁都覺得是一個驚喜,視覺效果十足,也讓閱讀成為一種享受!不僅如此,E級的文法句型也見運用在作品裡,令人欣喜!但較令人遺憾的是,E級作品水準參差不齊,落差頗大,許多學生使用艱澀的單字,也常有中式英文出現在作品裡;以故事結構來看,結局常缺乏鋪陳就突然結束;甚至同一個分校的學生作品在繪本的製作型式上完全如出一徹,這是我們所不樂見!期待下一屆的創作家能稟持創造視覺娛樂的好傳統外,在整體英文程度與故事內容結構的完整度上,有更顯著的提昇!

D級評審感言

D級學生較之B,C級學生所關心的事物已然不同!從環保議題、恐龍世界、未來生活、旅遊到外太空九大行星生活樣貌的想像等,再再顯示出參賽作品主題的多樣化,也看出DPrairie Dawn’s Purple Book帶來的影響已深入學生的日常生活之中,令人欣慰。但是在觸角延伸之餘,我們也希望學生在落筆編繪故事時可以多留意標點符號大小寫、拼字、單字的用法與句型變化等,也應避免重複使用直述句;故事的結論句若不夠清楚也容易予人故事未完成之憾!此外,好的繪圖不僅具有“示意”的功能,更是深具畫龍點睛之妙,不宜草率!


C級評審感言

C級得獎創作中,有許多令人眼睛為之一亮的作品!充滿創意與奇想的的故事,搭配傳神幽默的四格漫畫,讀來令人捧腹大笑,也不得不佩服學生們的創意;透由學生們的眼睛看世界,不難發現這個世界處處充滿樂趣!然而事情總有一體兩面,仍然有許多作品並未對人物個性或事件重點做出具體描述,反而流於流水帳似的瑣碎紀錄,以致於作品缺乏故事性,標點符號大小寫也未加以留意,甚至有些作品繪圖略顯草率,白白浪費了一個好故事,這是此次尋找創作家活動中最令人惋惜之處!

B級評審感言

B 級小小創作家競爭激烈,有許多充滿創意與趣味性的故事及圖畫。雖然學生的年紀偏低,所學的英文有限,但是小小創作家們還是能創作出令人莞爾的故事以及令人愛不釋手的的圖畫,讓人不禁想為他們按上好幾個讚!然而,這畢竟是“尋找創作家”的比賽,作品是否富故事性與創意,非流水帳似的瑣碎紀錄,故事應以文章的方式呈現而非條列式的短句,字與字之間應該要有空格,標點符號大小寫也要留意,這些都是影響評分的重點。希望小小創作家們能夠再接再勵,期待你們下一次更棒的表現!

A級評審感言

由於比賽主軸為著色比賽,因此評審重點還是在於用色\配色\筆觸,以及前景背景色彩的協調平衡,需運用得當以凸顯主體。額外添加創意,如人物或物品背景等,亦需在不干擾主體或能為自定主題增色並形成趣味,拼貼或是立體材質運用亦避免喧賓奪主。

本次獲選作品在用色上都有很獨到的創意,能跳脫既有的顏色框架,嘗試不同明度、彩度以及色相的搭配。
其中特優的作品能夠在主題與背景的配色上取得極佳的協調度是其關鍵,此外,這些作品在構圖與內容上的創意也是令人印象深刻的原因之一。

畫面的整體感是引起視覺愉悅的基礎,配色的協調自然就是手段。有不少小朋友能在"配色協調"這個原則下嘗試各種媒材的運用,確實也讓作品增色不少,但仍需注意媒材質感在畫面整體的層次中扮演加分或減分的功用。

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆自由分校,Jessie 李怡頡

Never End

After sliding from the mountaintop. I dropped into a river. I met lots of friends, and went on our journey to discover the new world that I had never seen.

Suddenly, a bid bloody mouth came open wide toward us, which stunned me. Being motionless and seeing my friends sucked into that evil mouth, I was taken away by the big wave.

I was taken to the coast. The sun was burning hot above me. I felt I was shrinking and floating to the air higher and higher.

Someone grabbed me. I saw numerous of my kind. We started drifting along the sky line. The mob became so huge that we all fell back to the earth.

Opening my eyes, I was shocked by the bid noise and high speed of cars. I was in a city, and a pit.

Thanks fully, people in the city didn't want to make their shoes wet, they stayed away from the puddle where I stayed.

I had stayed there for three days. The sun took me out of the nasty place and back to my favorite blue sky.

That was me, a water drop.


學校名稱:自由 分校
學生姓名:Jessie Y. C. Li (李怡頡)
就讀期數:S217
指導老師:Terry 劉凰儀

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Lucia 李宜親

Sammy's Rainbow World

This is a story about a boy named Sammy.

One day when he got home, he saw something shiny on the street. He was curious, so he went closer.
It was a beautiful necklace.

When he picked it up, all of a sudden, he was over the rainbow.

I t was a colorful world. The sky was violet, the mountains were indigo and the trees were blue. What a beautiful sight!

When Sammy walked further, he saw more and more amazing things, There was a village and many dwarfs living there.

Some of them were picking some crystal fruits from the trees made of gold. Some were catching fish in a green creek while others were singing with birds. These birds were the most beautiful birds that Sam had ever seen.

Sammy found the dwarfs were friendly to him. They swam in the green creek and had some crispy fruits. They fad a lot of fun.

Finally, Sammy asked the dwarfs if they knew who the owner of the necklace was. They told him it belonged to the queen.

They took him to the queen and he returned it to her. The queen was so thankful to Sammy that she gave him a black box as a gift.

The queen told him that he cold fly to the village anytime with boots. That made Sammy feel really grand.

Sammy was very happy and excited. He couldn't wait to see what it was in. To his surprise, it was a pair of flying boots.

From then on, Sammy went over the colorful world from time to time.


學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Lucia Y. C. Li (李宜親)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Emily 張家慧
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Mickey 許家綸

Treasure Around Me

There is lots of treasure around us, but most of it has not been found yet.

I wanted to find my own treasure, so I started my journey with my family's support.

The people in my family were very friendly and I loved them very much, but I thought the treasure wasn't there, so I left my home.

First, I went to my school. The teachers were nice here and they taught me lots of things. I walked around my school, but I didn't find my treasure here, so I left.

Second, I went to the beach.

While I was walking along the beach, many beautiful memories came back to my mind. I used to have a wonderful time with my family here.

Before I was about to leave, I met my friend, Sam, who decided to go with me.

Then, we went to the park together. We recalled all the memories that we had before we continued our journey.

I remember that when I was little, I played ball, flew a kite and went on a swing with my brothers and Sam here.

Unfortunately, I still didn't find the treasure here. I wanted to give it up and go home, but Sam told me not do that, so I gave myself the last chance.

I felt hungry after a long day's walk. We decided to have dinner first before taking off again.

I tool Sam to my favorite place for dinner where I went often with my family.

When we had dinner, I suddenly started missing my family. We had lots of fun together and no matter where I went I thought about them.

Finally, I quickly finished my food and ran back home to tell them about the treasure I found was them.
Without them, my life would be sad. So, my family is my treasure.



學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Mickey C. L. Hsu (許家綸)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Vivian 朱吉雲
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Annie 李適安


Tom's Basketball Dream

A boy called Tom likes to play basketball and he likes Jeremy Lin very much.

Because of his height, he never thinks about joining a basketball team.

He always watches basketball games on TV and practices the skills that he learns from the games at the backyard alone.

One day, he showed his good skills in the PE class and his teacher was very surprised to see that.

The teacher asked Tom to join the basketball teams as he believed that Tom could do well.

Tom was so happy about it and he promised his teacher that he would always do his best.

At first, his teammates laughed at his height and didn't think he could play well.

Though Tom felt bad about what they said about him, he didn't quit.

A month after Tom joined the basketball team, there was an important game held in his city.

In this game, Tom scored the most points for the team, so he was excited and his teammates were so surprised.

Ever since then, nobody has laughed at him again, They even asked Tom how to improve their basketball skills.

Now, Tom is sure of himself and he still practices hard.

Tom understood that the height wasn't a problem.

As long as you are willing to reach for your goal, success isn't impossible.

Tom enjoys playing basketball now and he wants to be a good player just like his idol, Jeremy Lin.


學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Annie S. A. Li (李適安)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Vivian 朱吉雲
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Jenny 石宗諺

The Flying house

One morning, when John woke up. He felt so energetic. He finished his breakfast quickly and he went to work, but as soon as he walked out if the door. He found himself flying He felt very surprised, so he wanted to know why he was flying.

He looked every where around him. Surprising, he found a red and blue box next to his car. The box was shiny and beautiful. When he shacked the box, he could fly higher.

So he shacked the box so many times that he flew all the way up to the space. When he was in the space, he found that he could breathe in the space.

He saw many rocks and stars flying on the space. Suddenly, he saw a special rock. It was a blue and red rock. Then he larded on the rock.

He saw the same machine on that rock too. But it was much bigger. He also found if he pushed the box, the rock would move faster. If he pulled it, it would move slower. So he pushed it. The rock move faster and faster.

Then he saw a plant, it was all blue and red just like the box . Suddenly, he couldn't control it. The rock flew to the plant by itself.

When he landed he saw an alien. It was blue and it could speak English.

The alien sad: “Thank you for bringing the box back to us. The box actually chooses people who can control it. It chose toy, that means you are our friend. We will give you a trip in our plant.” The alien told him that he could get on their UFO, so off they went!

The UFO took him to the black plant. There were plants and oceans every where. But they didn't have any sun. Instead then had twelve moons.

He said: “I'm hungry. The alien quickly ran away and soon a bottle of give back. He tasted that. At first, it tasted sweet. Then it changed into salty. Then is sour and sweet. When he finish that. He felt very full.

The alien said, they had to get to another plant and they would take him to the Earth first, so he got back.

When he got home, he couldn't find his house anymore. He could only see a tall building instead. Then alien said: “One day in our plant is 100 years
 in your plant.”

學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Jenny C. Y. Shih (石宗諺)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆北港分校,Eric 王子豪

My diary of Sesame

Today was a sunny day and it was very hot. I arrived at a cram school named ”Sesame Street” My dad dropped me off there. There are all funny-looking Muppet's and a bunch of kids. Oh my goodness! You won't want to go there again if you go one time.

Today was hot and I had to go to “Sesame Street” again. There were a whole bunch of kids there. At my school, I am the youngest student of all, but at “Sesame Street”. I'm the oldest one.

Today, I went to “Sesame Street: again. Finally, a classmate appeared who’s age is closer to mine. 

He's Wilson, I thought that I had found a man who I could talk with at long last, but ……

Today I had a monthly test at Sesame Street. The questions were pretty easy.

Today our test scores were announced! I got FIRST!!

Today our class was merged with another class, so our new class has lots of people in it.

Today our class got a new classmate, Big Bird Wu. What an excellent name!!

One of girls in my class, Jessie, is very savage, but her achievements are great, so my championship is ion danger.

Today, we talked about constellations. Big Bird Wu is a Caner. Opps… We didn't know which cancer he is. XDD

My teacher, Julie, usually puts on an unhappy face. She said that she is relaxing, but she is a very cool and funny teacher actually.

Today we kicked each other to decide where we can put our feet I think we will argue like that forever.

Today was sad. I was signed up to make a creative novel by Julie.


學校名稱:北港 分校
學生姓名:Eric T. H. Wang (王子豪)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Julie Chen

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆大雅分校,Irene 賴宜伶

A Lesson From a Raindrop

Once upon a time, there was a raindrop named Sarah. She had many friends. They liked to have fun together.

They could become a gas, a liquid or a solid and they felt terrific every day.

One day, when Sarah and her friends played with the clouds, they saw smoke drifting in the sky.
“What’s that? It smells awful.” Sarah said. “We think so, too.” Her friends answered. Then, Sarah and her friends decided to go take a look.'

After arriving at the destination, Sarah and her friends were so surprised that shouted loudly, “Look! There are lots of factories there. And the smoke comes out from the chimney.

“Also, the river next to the factories is polluted. There are lots of garbage, plastic bags and tins in the river,” said her friends.

They found that the reason why there was smoke in the sky was the environment was being destroyed by people.

Therefore, Sarah got an idea to teach the people a lesson. She went back and asked more friends for help.

The next day, it rained cats and gods. And it lasted for three days.

Because of the heavy rain, it caused a fold. Due to the fold, the factories couldn't produce goods. Also, the environment became a mess.

People were so scared that they knew that they did something harmful to the environment.

After that, they started to clean the river and do recycling.

Most important of all, the factory workers reduced the emissions of exhaust gases.

Sarah was so happy that people learned the lesson. From then on, people knew that they had to be nice to their environment.


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Irene Y. L. Lai (賴宜伶)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Sally 林育瑤

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Marisa 劉妍慧

THE HAPPY KINGDOM

Along long time ago, there was a Snow king don. There was a king called Charming and a queen called Snow White. They had a child called Olivia.

Olivia was brave, but silly. Her hands had a magic power, that they could kill every evil person. One day, while Snow White was walking in the Dark forest, a wind blew and all the servants couldn't open their eyes. When they opened their eyes again. Snow White was gone.

The servants were very worried, so they quickly told King Charming about this. King Charming was very sad, so her got sick.

Olivia and her friend Jack knew about it , so they planned to find Snow White. They ran to the Dark forest. And found a big strange hole.

Olivia and Jack heard voices from the hole, so they just jumped in. It was dark there, so they had to walk slowly and carefully. After few minutes, Olivia was very tired, so she said to Jack, “ Jack. Can we take a break?”

While Olivia and Jack were resting, a huge snake crawled quickly and wanted to bite them. Olivia and Jack got scared and they ran quickly into the cave.

Suddenly, they saw light on their right hand side. They ran to the light and saw a kingdom.

Everything was purple in this kingdom. Even the castle was purple and there were many huge birds flying in the sky.

Olivia and Jack carefully walked into the castle. When they walked in, there was Purple Queen sitting on a purple chair. And next to her, they saw Snow White sitting in a big purple cage.

Olivia went to the cage and shouted to the Purple Queen, “Free my mother!!” She ran to the Purple Queen with a knife. But , the Purple Queen was fast.

Before Olivia could stab the Purple Queen. The queen held her hands to stop her. She didn't know the magic power of Olivia's hands.

Suddenly, she was on fire. She shouted loudly and busted into ashes. Olivia beat the queen with her magical hands.

Finally, Olivia and Jack found a key and opened the cage. Snow White, Olivia and Jack went to the Snow kingdom and everybody was so happy an had a bid party.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Marisa Y. H. Liu (劉妍慧)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆新竹北大分校,Eva 方星懿

Benjamin's Fancy Adventure

People always want what they don't have.

Benjamin is a naughty and full of imagination perch. He lives in a small pond with his family.

One day, Benjamin went out to play with his best friend, Clisa. He told her that he would like to go to the ocean. He wanted to see beautiful surfs and shells.

Time flew away, it was dark now. Clisa said goodbye to Benjamin and went home.

Benjamin's mother asked him to go home. Though he wanted to go to the ocean, he went home finally.

The next day, Benjamin went out by himself. He saw Mr. Frog. Benjamin told him he wondered to live on the land like him.

Mr. Frog said, “Are you joking?” Then Benjamin kept swimming.

After a while, he saw Mrs. Sea-fowl. He told her he wondered to go to the ocean.

Mrs. Sea fowl laughed at him and told him that the seawater is too salty for perches.

Then, Benjamin arrived at a river, he met Jimmy, a beaver. Jimmy invited him to have a delicious dinner and stay for a night.

The third day, Benjamin arrived at a tidal flat unconsciously. He saw a fish which looks almost the same as him. They made friends and kept swimming together.

Suddenly, a huge surd carried him to the ocean.

Benjamin felt scared and missed his family because ocean is too dark and deep. He asked a calm for help, but it was useless.

Benjamin felt helpless and uncomfortable because the seawater is too salty. Then he heard a beautiful voice.

“Why are you crying?” asked a gorgeous mermaid. Benjamin told her about his adventure, and she promised to help him.

Abruptly, a bigger surf than before carried him into the blue sky, He felt excited because he saw the fantastic beach.

The colorful shells shone in the sunshine.

Benjamin landed on the beach, but he was so dry that he was dying. Big Bird saw him and said, “Why are you here, perch?”, and helped him back to the river.

Benjamin just wants to stay with his family together forever now. He knows that his home is the best place in the world.

Cherish what you have is happiness.


學校名稱:新竹北大分校
學生姓名:Eva H. Y. Fang (方星懿)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Jessica 戴文寶

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆竹科分校,Vicky 張芊姿

My Journal JUL AUG By Elmo
This journal belongs to Elmo.

Canada:
I visited Canada. Canada is a very beautiful country. If you come to Canada, you shouldn't miss Summer Market in Salt Spring Island. In the market, each booth has their own characteristic, like soaphangingsCampanella, and candles. It's very cool! Everybody likes it!                                2016.7.2

Australia:
I went to Australia. Their official language is English, so I could talk to them easily. The Sydney Opera House is a well – known cultural center. Their visual arts are thought to have begun with the body painting of its peoples. Australia is an amazing country. I love it!                                        2016.7.10

Italy:
I visited Italy. Everyone said Italians are carefree and friendly. They also like soccer! I tasted many cuisine, like tiramisupastapizza and risotto. They were so yummy! And I went to Torre di Pissa, it was designed as a finished, the building leaned, but it was still wonderful! If I have another chance to go to Italy, I will be very very excited!                                                                                       2016.7.16

Egypt:
I went to Egypt. Egypt was hot and dry! I saw the pyramids, they were very high and huge, and the pyramids in Egypt were very old. I also visited Alexandria. Alexandria is the second largest city in Egypt. I think Egypt is the most amazing place in the world!                                                  2016.7.22

Brazil:
I saw the biggest “ Christ the Redeemer” of the world in Rio de Janeiro. It's pretty good, what a beautiful statue! It was the most spectacular view I have ever seen, I also watched the 2016 Olympic Games in Brazil. It was wonderful! Brazilian like to dance Samba and play soccer. I think I have to practice more, or I will lose a lot of points!                                                                             2016.7.27

Austria:
I visited Austria. I was very glad to visit here. I went to Vienna State Opera. It's the main symbol in Austria. Vienna is a famous place for music, like Mozart, he was born in Vienna. Austria is beautiful! The people in Austria are very friendly. I love Austria!                                                            2016.8.4

Taiwan:
I came to Taiwan. It's a wonderful Island on Pacific Ocean. First, I went to Taipei 101, It's the second highest building in the world. When I looked down the city, everything is small. Then, I went to the night markets. At the night market, the toys are very interesting; the food is delicious!
Taiwan in fantastic!!                                                                                                              2016.8.13


學校名稱:竹科分校
學生姓名:Vicky C. T. Chang (張芊姿)
就讀期數:S217
指導老師:Lily Lily

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆彰化中央分校,Gina 賴彥均

Why the Rabbits Have Short Tails
Long ago. Rabbits were very cute and had long long tail. That all changed because of a greedy little rabbit.

One day, a little rabbit saw fresh vegetables across the river, but he couldn't swim.

When he saw a crocodile, he came up with an idea. The rabbit said “Poor crocodile! Why don’t you have any friends?”

The crocodile was upset to hear this. So he shouted. “Who said that I don’t have any friends? I do have lots of friends!” Yet the rabbit said in purpose. “ I won’t believe you unless you can prove it.”

The crocodile dived into the water and called ring~ for his friends. After a while, lots of crocodiles lined up on the river, The crocodile said proudly, “See, I am charming and popular.”

But the smart rabbit said, “Wait! I need to count. One 1, two 2, three 3, four 4, five 5….” As he counted, he hopped toward the other side of the river.

“Ha! Ha! Ha! Fool crocodiles. All I want is enjoying the fresh vegetables! Who cares about silly crocodiles?!”

Suddenly, the crocodile who was nearest the rabbit jumped up and bit the rabbits long tail!

The rabbit pulled and pulled, and luckily he ran away from the furious crocodiles.

When the rabbit got home, his short broken tail become popular in surprise.

As a result, the other rabbits tired their best to get a short tail just like his.

That is why, all rabbits nowadays have short tails.


學校名稱:彰化中央分校
學生姓名:Gina Y. C. Lai (賴彥均)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Carina 劉莉萍

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☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆歸仁分校,Bruce 黃皇鳴

Little Dinosaur Find the house
One day morning, there was an egg under the tree, but this egg was different from the other eggs, It was a dinosaur's egg.

Three month ago, this egg to cracked and here it came a little dinosaur. The little dinosaur want a home, so he started to find its home.

First, he met a bird. He asked the bird : Can I live in your nest?” The bird said “okay.”

When the little dinosaur lived in the nest, he felt not comfortable, because the nest was so small.

Next, he met a fish, He asked “Mr. fish can I live in your house?” The fish said “ Welcome.”

But little dinosaur couldn't stay in the water for lone time, so went away.

After that, he met the monkey. The monkey said “ Can I help you?” little dinosaur said, “Yes ,I want to find a home. Would you help me:” Monkey said .”Of course.”

Then little dinosaur followed the monkey. They went to the human's would, the little dinosaur was surprised.

They walked on sidewalk. Then human saw the dinosaur they were very surprised, because the dinosaur has gone in the world.

Then the next morning, the little dinosaur was reported by TV. Many archaeologist and reporters were liked the dinosaur.

Finally, little dinosaur found a friendly boy. He is Tom. He was different from anybody. He wanted to help the little dinosaur. Then Tom went away to a natural place and helped little dinosaur to make a comfortable home.

So, they went to the mountains. Tom helped little dinosaur to dig a care. And little dinosaur lived in it.
After that. The little dinosaur said :good-bye.” To Tom and the monkey. Little dinosaur was very thankful to then.

From then on, no one except Tom and monkey knew where the little dinosaur was and the little dinosaur was happy to live there.


學校名稱:歸仁 分校
學生姓名:Bruce H. M. Huang (黃皇鳴)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:James 廖育乾

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☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆彰化中央分校,Aleen 盧彥霖

How The zebras Got Black Stripes?

Do you know the zebras got black stripes? Long time ago, the zebras were completely white, without any stripes.

One day, a hungry greedy zebra called Zane Wandered in the forest.

He was surprised to see a big meadow with a lot of fresh green grass.

Immediately, he called the other zebras to join him. They rushed to it with happiness and couldn't stop eating.

After all the zebras got full, they walked on an old bridge together. However, they were so heavy that the bridge crashed!

“Splash!!!” the zebras fell in the river. “Help!” They screamed loudly.

Many fish swam to them, but they were not strong enough to save fat heavy zebras. Soon, the zebras fainted.

In a hurry, the fish tied the zebras bodies with some seaweeds and pulled them back to the ground. Yet the zebras didn't wake up.

They fainted for two days, The sun and the moon both shone very hard to wake up the zebras.
Finally, the zebras woke up one by one.

When they tumbled to the river to wash their face, they were shocked! On their body, there were stripes because of sunburn!

That's why the zebras have black stripes now saday.



學校名稱:彰化中央 分校
學生姓名:Aileen Y. L. Lu (盧彥霖)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Carina 劉莉萍

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☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大新分校,Jessica 張宇捷

Over the rainbow

I wish I could be over the rainbow one day because I think there a large beautiful castle, many flower and tall trees are made if candy.

Many friendly little people and animals were made of jelly and there were two big smart giants living there.

I would play with the friendly little people there and I could ride on the clouds.

The little people would cook big meals to heart me and I would play games with them.

I wouldn't be tired so I could sit on the tall tree and listen to birds singing all day long.

Over the rainbow, I didn't have to go to the cram school and do homework.

I could eat a lot of very sweet candy and play with my new friends all day long.

I could sit on a cloud to fly to everywhere.

If I wanted to sleep, I could lie on the moon or on a soft cloud.

I could play with lovely animals everyday.

The birds would sing a beautiful song for me, a dog could play with me and many small little people could make some snacks for me to eat.

When I grow up, I would like to invent one machine that could bring me to go over the rainbow.


學校名稱:大新 分校
學生姓名:Jessica Y. C. Chang (張宇捷)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Eden 羅筑尹

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☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆崇德分校,Angela 楊琇宇


UGLY PATT
PATT wasn't a pretty girl.

At school, some naughty boys always made fun of her.

Among all these boys, Will was the tallest and strongest. He told everyone if they interacted with Patt, they'd become ugly too. Therefore, nobody wanted to make friends with her, because they didn't want to become “ugly Patt's ugly friend.”

However, there was someone that talked to Patt everyday, the milkman. His name was Angelo, which meant “ the messenger of God” in Italian

Every day after Patt left the house for school, she said hello to the milkman who was busily delivering milk from house to house. He was friendly and nice.

You can say that Angelo was Patt's best and only friend. But everything was about to change…

This day, Patt put on her best dress and even wore make-up and perfume for school. She had decided that she wanted to be beautiful and perfect. She couldn't stand the solitude and the mocking any more.

When she finally finished dressing she contently opened the door, and saw Angelo.

Much to her surprise. Angelo didn't say anything to her. He couldn't recognize Patt with all her mascara and lipstick.

Patt was very sad about this. She took a bottle of milk with her and rushed to the school bus.

As she'd expected, everyone at school was crazy about her. Not know she was actually Patt, they thought she was a transfer student, giving her the name “New Beauty.”

Although she was now popular, Patt was still sad about the milkman's reaction. Of course she wanted to be accepted, but she wanted her best friend more.

She took a look at her milk. A sentence was some how written on the bottle: YOU ARE PERFECT BEING YOUR SELF. LOVE WHO YOU ARE.

Patt smiled. She didn't forget that “Angelo” meant “ the messenger of God.”

Patt wasn't a pretty girl.

But she loved that about herself. She'd never tired to change who she was ever again.


學校名稱:崇德 分校
學生姓名:Angela H. Y. Yang (楊琇宇)
就讀期數:S217
指導老師:Ruth 顏麗君

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