2013年7月1日 星期一

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Shane 劉獻文

Beggar Prince
There was a beggar called Tim and he was 26 years old. He had a little money and he live in a village. His family all passed away, but he was very happy every day.

One day, Tim missed his father and he was very sad. He went to his father's bed room. When he opened the door, his key fell on the floor. He knelt down and wanted to pick up the key.

Suddenly, he saw a shiny box next to key and he picked it up. He opened the box and saw a key, a sword, and a map in it.

It was the map of his village. There was a yellow star on it. He followed the direction in the map and he found a grave yard, but he didn't know where.

He found a tomb with a lock and a star picture on it. He unlocked it with the key and. Suddenly, he found some long and big stairs.

He walked down the stairs and he found a room. There was a stat me of a warrior. When he came close to it, it started moving.

The warrior was very tall and strong and it wanted to kill Tim with a big sword. He was very scared and me took out his sword that he found in a box.

He stared to fight with the warrior. He wanted to throw the sword in to the head of the warrior, but the warrior whit him away. He jump and throw the sword in to the head of the warrior.

He killed the warrior and he was very happy. He saw a very big door and he opened the door.

He found a lot of jewels and gold. He became very rich and he was very happy.

He had a very smart son. He told his son the story every night.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Shane H. W. Liu (劉獻文)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

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