2013年7月1日 星期一

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Lucia 李宜親

Sammy's Rainbow World

This is a story about a boy named Sammy.

One day when he got home, he saw something shiny on the street. He was curious, so he went closer.
It was a beautiful necklace.

When he picked it up, all of a sudden, he was over the rainbow.

I t was a colorful world. The sky was violet, the mountains were indigo and the trees were blue. What a beautiful sight!

When Sammy walked further, he saw more and more amazing things, There was a village and many dwarfs living there.

Some of them were picking some crystal fruits from the trees made of gold. Some were catching fish in a green creek while others were singing with birds. These birds were the most beautiful birds that Sam had ever seen.

Sammy found the dwarfs were friendly to him. They swam in the green creek and had some crispy fruits. They fad a lot of fun.

Finally, Sammy asked the dwarfs if they knew who the owner of the necklace was. They told him it belonged to the queen.

They took him to the queen and he returned it to her. The queen was so thankful to Sammy that she gave him a black box as a gift.

The queen told him that he cold fly to the village anytime with boots. That made Sammy feel really grand.

Sammy was very happy and excited. He couldn't wait to see what it was in. To his surprise, it was a pair of flying boots.

From then on, Sammy went over the colorful world from time to time.


學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Lucia Y. C. Li (李宜親)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Emily 張家慧
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Mickey 許家綸

Treasure Around Me

There is lots of treasure around us, but most of it has not been found yet.

I wanted to find my own treasure, so I started my journey with my family's support.

The people in my family were very friendly and I loved them very much, but I thought the treasure wasn't there, so I left my home.

First, I went to my school. The teachers were nice here and they taught me lots of things. I walked around my school, but I didn't find my treasure here, so I left.

Second, I went to the beach.

While I was walking along the beach, many beautiful memories came back to my mind. I used to have a wonderful time with my family here.

Before I was about to leave, I met my friend, Sam, who decided to go with me.

Then, we went to the park together. We recalled all the memories that we had before we continued our journey.

I remember that when I was little, I played ball, flew a kite and went on a swing with my brothers and Sam here.

Unfortunately, I still didn't find the treasure here. I wanted to give it up and go home, but Sam told me not do that, so I gave myself the last chance.

I felt hungry after a long day's walk. We decided to have dinner first before taking off again.

I tool Sam to my favorite place for dinner where I went often with my family.

When we had dinner, I suddenly started missing my family. We had lots of fun together and no matter where I went I thought about them.

Finally, I quickly finished my food and ran back home to tell them about the treasure I found was them.
Without them, my life would be sad. So, my family is my treasure.



學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Mickey C. L. Hsu (許家綸)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Vivian 朱吉雲
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Annie 李適安


Tom's Basketball Dream

A boy called Tom likes to play basketball and he likes Jeremy Lin very much.

Because of his height, he never thinks about joining a basketball team.

He always watches basketball games on TV and practices the skills that he learns from the games at the backyard alone.

One day, he showed his good skills in the PE class and his teacher was very surprised to see that.

The teacher asked Tom to join the basketball teams as he believed that Tom could do well.

Tom was so happy about it and he promised his teacher that he would always do his best.

At first, his teammates laughed at his height and didn't think he could play well.

Though Tom felt bad about what they said about him, he didn't quit.

A month after Tom joined the basketball team, there was an important game held in his city.

In this game, Tom scored the most points for the team, so he was excited and his teammates were so surprised.

Ever since then, nobody has laughed at him again, They even asked Tom how to improve their basketball skills.

Now, Tom is sure of himself and he still practices hard.

Tom understood that the height wasn't a problem.

As long as you are willing to reach for your goal, success isn't impossible.

Tom enjoys playing basketball now and he wants to be a good player just like his idol, Jeremy Lin.


學校名稱:大雅 分校
學生姓名:Annie S. A. Li (李適安)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Vivian 朱吉雲
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Jenny 石宗諺

The Flying house

One morning, when John woke up. He felt so energetic. He finished his breakfast quickly and he went to work, but as soon as he walked out if the door. He found himself flying He felt very surprised, so he wanted to know why he was flying.

He looked every where around him. Surprising, he found a red and blue box next to his car. The box was shiny and beautiful. When he shacked the box, he could fly higher.

So he shacked the box so many times that he flew all the way up to the space. When he was in the space, he found that he could breathe in the space.

He saw many rocks and stars flying on the space. Suddenly, he saw a special rock. It was a blue and red rock. Then he larded on the rock.

He saw the same machine on that rock too. But it was much bigger. He also found if he pushed the box, the rock would move faster. If he pulled it, it would move slower. So he pushed it. The rock move faster and faster.

Then he saw a plant, it was all blue and red just like the box . Suddenly, he couldn't control it. The rock flew to the plant by itself.

When he landed he saw an alien. It was blue and it could speak English.

The alien sad: “Thank you for bringing the box back to us. The box actually chooses people who can control it. It chose toy, that means you are our friend. We will give you a trip in our plant.” The alien told him that he could get on their UFO, so off they went!

The UFO took him to the black plant. There were plants and oceans every where. But they didn't have any sun. Instead then had twelve moons.

He said: “I'm hungry. The alien quickly ran away and soon a bottle of give back. He tasted that. At first, it tasted sweet. Then it changed into salty. Then is sour and sweet. When he finish that. He felt very full.

The alien said, they had to get to another plant and they would take him to the Earth first, so he got back.

When he got home, he couldn't find his house anymore. He could only see a tall building instead. Then alien said: “One day in our plant is 100 years
 in your plant.”

學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Jenny C. Y. Shih (石宗諺)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆北港分校,Eric 王子豪

My diary of Sesame

Today was a sunny day and it was very hot. I arrived at a cram school named ”Sesame Street” My dad dropped me off there. There are all funny-looking Muppet's and a bunch of kids. Oh my goodness! You won't want to go there again if you go one time.

Today was hot and I had to go to “Sesame Street” again. There were a whole bunch of kids there. At my school, I am the youngest student of all, but at “Sesame Street”. I'm the oldest one.

Today, I went to “Sesame Street: again. Finally, a classmate appeared who’s age is closer to mine. 

He's Wilson, I thought that I had found a man who I could talk with at long last, but ……

Today I had a monthly test at Sesame Street. The questions were pretty easy.

Today our test scores were announced! I got FIRST!!

Today our class was merged with another class, so our new class has lots of people in it.

Today our class got a new classmate, Big Bird Wu. What an excellent name!!

One of girls in my class, Jessie, is very savage, but her achievements are great, so my championship is ion danger.

Today, we talked about constellations. Big Bird Wu is a Caner. Opps… We didn't know which cancer he is. XDD

My teacher, Julie, usually puts on an unhappy face. She said that she is relaxing, but she is a very cool and funny teacher actually.

Today we kicked each other to decide where we can put our feet I think we will argue like that forever.

Today was sad. I was signed up to make a creative novel by Julie.


學校名稱:北港 分校
學生姓名:Eric T. H. Wang (王子豪)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Julie Chen

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆大雅分校,Irene 賴宜伶

A Lesson From a Raindrop

Once upon a time, there was a raindrop named Sarah. She had many friends. They liked to have fun together.

They could become a gas, a liquid or a solid and they felt terrific every day.

One day, when Sarah and her friends played with the clouds, they saw smoke drifting in the sky.
“What’s that? It smells awful.” Sarah said. “We think so, too.” Her friends answered. Then, Sarah and her friends decided to go take a look.'

After arriving at the destination, Sarah and her friends were so surprised that shouted loudly, “Look! There are lots of factories there. And the smoke comes out from the chimney.

“Also, the river next to the factories is polluted. There are lots of garbage, plastic bags and tins in the river,” said her friends.

They found that the reason why there was smoke in the sky was the environment was being destroyed by people.

Therefore, Sarah got an idea to teach the people a lesson. She went back and asked more friends for help.

The next day, it rained cats and gods. And it lasted for three days.

Because of the heavy rain, it caused a fold. Due to the fold, the factories couldn't produce goods. Also, the environment became a mess.

People were so scared that they knew that they did something harmful to the environment.

After that, they started to clean the river and do recycling.

Most important of all, the factory workers reduced the emissions of exhaust gases.

Sarah was so happy that people learned the lesson. From then on, people knew that they had to be nice to their environment.


學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Irene Y. L. Lai (賴宜伶)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Sally 林育瑤

得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Marisa 劉妍慧

THE HAPPY KINGDOM

Along long time ago, there was a Snow king don. There was a king called Charming and a queen called Snow White. They had a child called Olivia.

Olivia was brave, but silly. Her hands had a magic power, that they could kill every evil person. One day, while Snow White was walking in the Dark forest, a wind blew and all the servants couldn't open their eyes. When they opened their eyes again. Snow White was gone.

The servants were very worried, so they quickly told King Charming about this. King Charming was very sad, so her got sick.

Olivia and her friend Jack knew about it , so they planned to find Snow White. They ran to the Dark forest. And found a big strange hole.

Olivia and Jack heard voices from the hole, so they just jumped in. It was dark there, so they had to walk slowly and carefully. After few minutes, Olivia was very tired, so she said to Jack, “ Jack. Can we take a break?”

While Olivia and Jack were resting, a huge snake crawled quickly and wanted to bite them. Olivia and Jack got scared and they ran quickly into the cave.

Suddenly, they saw light on their right hand side. They ran to the light and saw a kingdom.

Everything was purple in this kingdom. Even the castle was purple and there were many huge birds flying in the sky.

Olivia and Jack carefully walked into the castle. When they walked in, there was Purple Queen sitting on a purple chair. And next to her, they saw Snow White sitting in a big purple cage.

Olivia went to the cage and shouted to the Purple Queen, “Free my mother!!” She ran to the Purple Queen with a knife. But , the Purple Queen was fast.

Before Olivia could stab the Purple Queen. The queen held her hands to stop her. She didn't know the magic power of Olivia's hands.

Suddenly, she was on fire. She shouted loudly and busted into ashes. Olivia beat the queen with her magical hands.

Finally, Olivia and Jack found a key and opened the cage. Snow White, Olivia and Jack went to the Snow kingdom and everybody was so happy an had a bid party.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Marisa Y. H. Liu (劉妍慧)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項