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2013年7月1日 星期一

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Jenny 石宗諺

The Flying house

One morning, when John woke up. He felt so energetic. He finished his breakfast quickly and he went to work, but as soon as he walked out if the door. He found himself flying He felt very surprised, so he wanted to know why he was flying.

He looked every where around him. Surprising, he found a red and blue box next to his car. The box was shiny and beautiful. When he shacked the box, he could fly higher.

So he shacked the box so many times that he flew all the way up to the space. When he was in the space, he found that he could breathe in the space.

He saw many rocks and stars flying on the space. Suddenly, he saw a special rock. It was a blue and red rock. Then he larded on the rock.

He saw the same machine on that rock too. But it was much bigger. He also found if he pushed the box, the rock would move faster. If he pulled it, it would move slower. So he pushed it. The rock move faster and faster.

Then he saw a plant, it was all blue and red just like the box . Suddenly, he couldn't control it. The rock flew to the plant by itself.

When he landed he saw an alien. It was blue and it could speak English.

The alien sad: “Thank you for bringing the box back to us. The box actually chooses people who can control it. It chose toy, that means you are our friend. We will give you a trip in our plant.” The alien told him that he could get on their UFO, so off they went!

The UFO took him to the black plant. There were plants and oceans every where. But they didn't have any sun. Instead then had twelve moons.

He said: “I'm hungry. The alien quickly ran away and soon a bottle of give back. He tasted that. At first, it tasted sweet. Then it changed into salty. Then is sour and sweet. When he finish that. He felt very full.

The alien said, they had to get to another plant and they would take him to the Earth first, so he got back.

When he got home, he couldn't find his house anymore. He could only see a tall building instead. Then alien said: “One day in our plant is 100 years
 in your plant.”

學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Jenny C. Y. Shih (石宗諺)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Marisa 劉妍慧

THE HAPPY KINGDOM

Along long time ago, there was a Snow king don. There was a king called Charming and a queen called Snow White. They had a child called Olivia.

Olivia was brave, but silly. Her hands had a magic power, that they could kill every evil person. One day, while Snow White was walking in the Dark forest, a wind blew and all the servants couldn't open their eyes. When they opened their eyes again. Snow White was gone.

The servants were very worried, so they quickly told King Charming about this. King Charming was very sad, so her got sick.

Olivia and her friend Jack knew about it , so they planned to find Snow White. They ran to the Dark forest. And found a big strange hole.

Olivia and Jack heard voices from the hole, so they just jumped in. It was dark there, so they had to walk slowly and carefully. After few minutes, Olivia was very tired, so she said to Jack, “ Jack. Can we take a break?”

While Olivia and Jack were resting, a huge snake crawled quickly and wanted to bite them. Olivia and Jack got scared and they ran quickly into the cave.

Suddenly, they saw light on their right hand side. They ran to the light and saw a kingdom.

Everything was purple in this kingdom. Even the castle was purple and there were many huge birds flying in the sky.

Olivia and Jack carefully walked into the castle. When they walked in, there was Purple Queen sitting on a purple chair. And next to her, they saw Snow White sitting in a big purple cage.

Olivia went to the cage and shouted to the Purple Queen, “Free my mother!!” She ran to the Purple Queen with a knife. But , the Purple Queen was fast.

Before Olivia could stab the Purple Queen. The queen held her hands to stop her. She didn't know the magic power of Olivia's hands.

Suddenly, she was on fire. She shouted loudly and busted into ashes. Olivia beat the queen with her magical hands.

Finally, Olivia and Jack found a key and opened the cage. Snow White, Olivia and Jack went to the Snow kingdom and everybody was so happy an had a bid party.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Marisa Y. H. Liu (劉妍慧)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Timmy 林柏廷

PENGUINS' JOURNEY
One day, a ship came to the South Pole. The people on the ship landed on a place where penguins lived.

When they arrived, they took out a net to catch the penguins. They were penguin hunters. The penguins quickly hid in an ice hole, but still, some of them were caught by the penguin hunters.

The hunters come here every month. The numbers of penguins became less and less.

They couldn't stand it anymore! So, they had a meeting. The meeting was about what they could do so that the people wouldn't come anymore.

In the meeting, a young penguin said “There is no way to stop those hunters from coming here. Maybe we can move to another place!”

Then, an old penguin said “ I remember there is a book about the world in the library. Maybe we can read it and decide where to move.” So all the penguins went to the library to look for it and finally they borrowed it home.

In the book, they saw many places like England、Australia、Japan, etc… They didn't know which place is good for them, so they decided to travel around the world and find their favorite place and get away from the penguin hunters.

After they made this decision. All of them were busy packing. They brought almost everything、Goggles、nail clippers、anchovies and of course, the book.

After one week, they started moving. When they swam to the Pacific Ocean, they saw a land about one hundred meters far from them. They landed there and opened the book to check which place it was. It said that this place was Taiwan.

They really like it here, so they decided to take a rest. They took out their anchovies and had a picnic on the beach. There was a sign said : South Bay.” It was a good place, but it was still not cold enough. So they jumped to the ocean and continued swimming.

After 2 weeks. Then saw another island. They saw many sakura trees. A lot of fresh fid and friendly people on the island. They knew that it was Japan. The weather was nice there.

They went to a restaurant there and they ordered some sashimi with wasabi it was delicious! They really like it here, but it was still not cold enough.

At last, they got to the North Pole. They saw many animals like polar bears – snowy foxes and killer whales. They became good friends. There were many big ice burgs, a lot of and icy fish and cool fresh air! They really liked it here and it was cold enough, so they lived there happily ever after.


學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Timmy P. T. Lin (林柏廷)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Cliff 郭志謙

Super Island
Once upon a time, there was an island called “The super Island “ There were so many different kinds of scary animals on it. Many people went there, but no one has every came back.

One day, there were three animals having a picnic in the mountain. They were a monkey a bear and a fox.

But on their way home. They were caught by some pirates.

The pirates took them to The Super Island and told them. “Your job is find all the gold and treasure for us, We will be back after three days If you don’t bring the treasure to us, we will leave you here and you can make friends with the monsters here.”

Off they went, left the monkey, the bear and the fox with a map of the island. They didn't know what to do and where to find the treasure.

The bear was thirsty. He suggested everyone to find some water and food so they have energy to find the treasure. The bear used his sensitive nose to find a big water fall. They all drank some water happily.
Suddenly, the water fall formed a big hole and swallowed them. When they woke up, they found themselves sitting by the water fall.

To their surprise. Everything was so big. They entered the giant world by going through the water fall. 

The trees were big The rocks were big. Even the flowers were big.

They saw many giant birds flying in the sky. They were scared that the birds in the sky would catch them and eat them, so they walked slowly and carefully.

After few hours, they came to a dark forest. Though the sun was big and shiny in the sky, they could hardly see anything.

Luckily, the clever monkey knew how to make torches and he did. In the forest, they saw many shadows moving around them. Suddenly, the fox saw a witch standing on a branch and saying get out of my island or you will be my evils servants like all the animals on this island” They realized that the animals here were very very scary was because they were bewitched.

So they started to flight. The fox dag a big hole and covered it with some grass and the bear quickly threw a big rock to the witch, but the witch was faster. She flew behind the bear and hit the bear with her broom, “Ya – hoo” The witch shouted.


學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Cliff C. C. Kuo (郭志謙)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Austin 徐尉嘉

The Dragon Village
In the legend, there was a floating island in the world. Only a few people know about it. It was over the pacific Ocean.

There were many special plants and animals living on it. One of the most special animals on the island were dragons.

They loved to stay on the island because it was peaceful and relaxing. Each one of them belonged to a wizard or a witch. The leader witch, Anny, had a water dragon and the leader wizard, Sam, had a fire dragon. Anny fed her dragon poison algae and Sam his dragon deer's livers.

There were two worlds on the island. The bright world and the dark world. Good wizards and witches lived in the bright world and there was a very evil wizard called Minos living in the dark world.

One day, Minos rode on his purple dragon to the bright world. He said, “ You put me in the dark world 100 years ago. I lived in the dark, wet and cold place and I was so lonely.”

“But you and your people can enjoy the sunshine and happiness every day. How unfair that is!! I will destroy everything here and turn this place into a living hell. I will give you three days. You leave or die.” Then he left. The wizards and witches were scared.

They had a meeting because they wanted to fight back. Witch Anny and Wizard Sam helped all the wizards and witches to their dragons and prepare for the fight.

After three days, Minos came to the bright side of the island again. He saw all the wizards and witches were waiting for him on their dragons. Witch Anny and Wizard Sam took every to fight with Minos.

The fought non – stop for three days. Finally, Minos gave up. Then he ran away. After the battle, many people died and many houses were broken. Even the forests were burned.

It took them one year to rebuild their houses and environment and they lived happily ever after.


學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Austin W.C. Hsu (徐尉嘉)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Shane 劉獻文

Beggar Prince
There was a beggar called Tim and he was 26 years old. He had a little money and he live in a village. His family all passed away, but he was very happy every day.

One day, Tim missed his father and he was very sad. He went to his father's bed room. When he opened the door, his key fell on the floor. He knelt down and wanted to pick up the key.

Suddenly, he saw a shiny box next to key and he picked it up. He opened the box and saw a key, a sword, and a map in it.

It was the map of his village. There was a yellow star on it. He followed the direction in the map and he found a grave yard, but he didn't know where.

He found a tomb with a lock and a star picture on it. He unlocked it with the key and. Suddenly, he found some long and big stairs.

He walked down the stairs and he found a room. There was a stat me of a warrior. When he came close to it, it started moving.

The warrior was very tall and strong and it wanted to kill Tim with a big sword. He was very scared and me took out his sword that he found in a box.

He stared to fight with the warrior. He wanted to throw the sword in to the head of the warrior, but the warrior whit him away. He jump and throw the sword in to the head of the warrior.

He killed the warrior and he was very happy. He saw a very big door and he opened the door.

He found a lot of jewels and gold. He became very rich and he was very happy.

He had a very smart son. He told his son the story every night.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Shane H. W. Liu (劉獻文)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Cynthia 黃榆欣

Angel's Journey
A long, long time ago. There was a nice and beautiful heaven in the sky and many angels lived there. They all lived happily in the heaven, but something scary happened.

One day, a pregnant anger called Mary who was kind and smart was about to deliver her baby. Everyone was very nervous, so they went to the hospital and find some doctors and nurses. They helped Mary to deliver her baby. The baby was strong and healthy.

Suddenly, a devil appeared. He caught Mary and took her away. He locked her in a bottle and he said, “I have never had an angel in my collection. This angel is perfect. Hahaha! ”

His father named the baby Mark. He took a good care of him and taught him magic and everything, inducing where his mom was. Day after day, Mark grew up. Now he was twenty years old.

One day, Mark told his father that he wanted to save his mother because he was strong and brave now. His father gave him a magic wand and a magic book. He stood on the magic book and said a spell. Then he suddenly went to the hell.

When he came to the hell, he saw a river. He wanted to crass the river, but he needed to pay the money. He paid the money to the ghost and crossed the river. After he crossed the river, he saw many poor souls being punished.

After that, he saw the devil's castle. He went in to the castle quietly and he went to the devil's room.
He saw a big closet with hundreds of bottles. Each bottle has a magic creature and all the bottles are locked.

He found the bottle with his mother inside, but he didn't have the key. He went to the devil's bedroom and he saw the key was in the devil’s hand. He said a magic spell and the devil’s hand opened.

He saved his mother, but the devil heard the sound and he work up.

The devil wanted to catch them, but they ran fast. They escaped safely.

When they came back to the heaven in the sky, all the angels were very happy because Mark saved his mother. Everyone all lived happily in the heaven.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Cynthia Y. H. Huang (黃榆欣)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Steven 劉棋汶

Maple Village
There was a village called Maple village. People in the village started to become rich. The Wesley family, the Lee family and the Wang family were all very rich.

There was a man called Jack and he also lived in this village. He cut trees for a living and his was very poor. His wife told him to ask  Wesley how to become rich.

In the Wesley's house, he told Jack that in the mountain there was a lake. If you went there and threw something inside, a beautiful fairy would appear and turned the thing that you throw into gold.

Wesley sold the gold and he become rich. He bought a new house, a new car and he even bought a big diamond ring for his wife, But Jack found that Wesley's eyes are red.

Jack went home and told his wife how Wesley become rich. His wife told him to do the same thing that Wesley did, but he didn't want to do it. Because he thought this was strange. He found people who came back from the lake had red eyes.

After few days, they finished spending all the money and they were very hungry. That night, Jack decided to go to the lake, but someone was already there. It wash is neighbor, Timmy.

He saw Timmy throwing an ax into the lake and a fairy appeared with a golden ax. When Timmy took the golden ax from the fairy's hand. The fairy suddenly opened Timmy's mouth and put some eggs into it. Then his eyes became red.

Jack was scared and he wanted to run away But Timmy was his best friend and he wanted  to save him.

So after Timmy left, he walked to the lake and threw the pot into it. Few minutes later, the fairy appeared. When the fairy wanted to give him the golden pot came closer to Jack.

Jack took out a knife and stabbed the fairy in the head. The fairy screamed crazily and started to melt.

Then she disappeared into the air and the only thing left was a lot of gold and some medicine.

He took all the gold and medicine back. He gave the medicine to the villages who had red eyes and after they took the medicine, their eyes all become normal.

Jack was rich and happy and he lived with his wife happily ever after.


學校名稱:東勢 分校
學生姓名:Steven C. W. Liu (劉棋汶)
就讀期數:S212
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆D級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Angel 劉梓萱

The dinosaur in my back yard
I woke up this morning and a big surprise was waiting for me! There was a scary dinosaur in my backyard!
First, I felt scared because I thought it would bite me! The dinosaur looked dangerous, it had many sharp teeth and a big green body.
Then I told my mother and father about what I saw and they felt scared, too!
Next, a scientist knocked on my door, he said, “I want to help you.” The scientist used a special green medicine to make the dinosaur become smaller. Wow! The dinosaur looked so cute!
Finally, the dinosaur became my friend, and I learned that scary things have a heart, too.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Angel T. H. Liu (劉梓萱)
就讀期數:S210
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:D級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆D級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校 Clare 張芷瑄

My Adventure!
One morning, my family and I took a trip on a hot air balloon to Taipei. Our balloon was colorful and large, it had a big basket and some ropes.
I felt scared, because it was very high, I looked down and everything become very small, people looked like ants!
First, we went to Taipei 101, it was so tall! Then, we had a problem! Our balloon was moving closer to the building, it was going to bump into the Taipei 101. My family and I quickly cooperated, we threw out all the heavy things. The balloon turned away. Yay! We were safe, we felt so happy. Finally, we went back home, I thought it was a wonderful and exciting trip!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Clare C. H. Chang (張芷瑄)
就讀期數:S210
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:D級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆D級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校 Sandy 侯欣妤

A Strawberry cake
One morning, I baked a strawberry cake for my mother, I worked with my sister in the kitchen, because it was my mother’s birthday.
First, we went to the supermarket to buy the eggs、sugar、flour、milk and strawberries. Then we went back home to cooperate to back the cake.
Next, we mixed everything and put it in to the over bake, when it was finished we put strawberries on it, and the cake was done!
Finally, we said “Surprise” to my mother, we ate the strawberry cake together, it tasted so delicious!
It was so fun to cooperate with my sister, because my sister and I laughed all the time.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Sandy H. Y. Hou (侯欣妤)
就讀期數:S210
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea

得獎殊榮:D級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆D級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Sean 劉君翔

My Dragon  Adventure!
Once upon a time, I was a wizard in a magic city. One day, I saw someone selling a dragon. So, I used my magic power to make gold to buy the dragon.
It had a pair of wings, white fur on it’s breast and a pointy tail. It looked like gold. We took off into the sky, it flew high up into the clouds. I looked clown, everything was so tiny. Then, we saw the clouds change from white to dark, and we saw another dragon come out of the clouds. We fought with it and won, we became friends!
Finally, I told the dragon to go home, because I want it to be free.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Seain C.Y Liu(劉君翔)
就讀期數:S210
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea

得獎殊榮:D級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

2013年6月30日 星期日

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Cathy 詹可婕

Super T-C Penguin
This world is very lucky, because there is a cool hero called “Super T-C penguin”. She has X-ray eyes, a special watch and a power drink to make things small.
One day, Jeff gets lost in the forest! But Jeff is very lucky, because his friend is super T-C! Super T-C's watch says , “Beep! Beep!” So, Super T-C uses her x-ray eyes to find Jeff. First , she gives Jeff the Power Drink. Now, Jeff is very small and T-C Penguin takes him home. At home he grows bigger again. Finally, Jeff says, ”Let's have a party”. Everybody is so happy!!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Cathy K. C. Chan (詹可婕)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級四格圖畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Norman 陳詩孟

My Alien Friend
One morning, I woke up, I stretched my arms, but, saw Something very strange, I was on the moon!
This still wasn't the strangest thing, there was a monster! It was six meters tall, it had six hands, a huge mouth, that was the same size as my house!
After a while, I wanted to go home, He said, ”No!” If you go home, I will destroy the Earth!”. I said , “If you take me back, I will be your friend forever and you can visit me any time you want.” So , now I have an alien friend.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Norman Sh. M. Chen (陳詩孟)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項


☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Emma 張詠涵

Don't Litter
I think it is very bad to throw garbage on the floor because so many animals and plants will die. It can bring bad bugs like cockroaches and flies
One day I see a girl called Cathy, She throws her potato chips bag in the garden. I feel angry and say, “You can't throw garbage in the garden!” So I teach Cathy to care for the Earth.
Next, we work together and clean up all the garbage. Now, everything looks beautiful again.
I think people can throw garbage in garbage cans and recycle. I love my Earth!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Emma Y. H. Chang (張詠涵)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Sander 楊韶淵

Going to the moon.
Last night, I have a dream. My friend Carrol and I are going to the moon. I feel excited, because I can sit on the rocket and go super fast into the sky!
Our rocket has four round windows, it is tall and shiny, I like it very much. First, we get inside, then I push a big red button and up we go!
We hear the fire go, “Boom Boom” behind us! Now, we are in space, I can see the Earth, it looks so small, and I see the sun, it looks so big and not. Wow! I like my dream.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Sander Ch. Y. Yang (楊韶淵)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice Kim Borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項

☆C級四格圖畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Eric 詹翔允

  My new super power
One day, I make delicious cookies. At night, the magical star changes them to the magical cookies.
When I eat the cookies, ”Bang! Bong!” I get a new super power! I can bring things to my hands just by using my brain power.
First, in the park I see a thief stealing a lady's bag, it's so terrible! I need to help her, so I get her bag back with my super power. She says,  ”Thank you, nice boy.”
Finally, I will keep my super power, because I want to help people around the world!


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Eric H. Y. Chan (詹翔允)
就讀期數:S206
指導老師:Candice kim borea
得獎殊榮:C級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Cherry 劉宸妤

MY Dream
I am dreaming on my bed. I have a happy dream. I am running in the dream. Do you
like to run in the race? I want to be number one. Maybe I will win a pencil box! Yay! I like my dream.


學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Cherry Ch. Y .Liu (劉宸妤)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Candice kim Borea

得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項