B 級小小創作家競爭激烈,有許多充滿創意與趣味性的故事及圖畫。雖然學生的年紀偏低,所學的英文有限,但是小小創作家們還是能創作出令人莞爾的故事以及令人愛不釋手的的圖畫,讓人不禁想為他們按上好幾個讚!然而,這畢竟是“尋找創作家”的比賽,作品是否富故事性與創意,非流水帳似的瑣碎紀錄,故事應以文章的方式呈現而非條列式的短句,字與字之間應該要有空格,標點符號大小寫也要留意,這些都是影響評分的重點。希望小小創作家們能夠再接再勵,期待你們下一次更棒的表現!
2013年7月1日 星期一
2013年6月30日 星期日
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆萊斯特分校,Terry 楊立丞
Terry likes to play video games very much, especially the game ‘Angry
Birds .
One day, he plays the game as he walks across the street. He doesn't
notice that there is a car driving toward him. Bang! The car bumps into him. Of
course, the game he was playing is over.
學校名稱:萊斯特分校
學生姓名:Terry (楊立丞)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Cindy 沈柔忻
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆苗栗分校,PAUL 劉哲杰
I met a vampire in a dark house. He looked at me and wanted to suck
my blood. I started to run to look for some garlic and a cross. “Paul, wake up!”
said my mom. Wow, what a scary dream!
學校名稱:苗栗分校
學生姓名:PAUL C.C. Liu (劉哲杰)
就讀期數:S114
指導老師:Chao 邱巧凡
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆內壢分校,Ivy 吳宛諭
Welcome
To Sesame Street
My favorite English school is Sesame Street . My
teachers are funny and my classmates are friendly, I like Ernie and Bert best
of all. They are good friends and I have good friends in my class, too. I enjoy
learning ABCs and I hope you like English, too. Welcome to Sesame Street !
學校名稱:內壢分校
學生姓名:Ivy (吳宛諭)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Michelle 黃敏淑
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆內壢分校,Ivy 楊佳珊
My Favorite Sesame
Street Muppet
I like Elmo best of all because Elmo is
very cute. Elmo likes to laugh and I like to laugh, too. Every morning I read
my favorite English story book to Elmo. Every night I sing my favorite English
song for him. I am happy to be with Elmo every day.
學校名稱:內壢分校
學生姓名:Ivy (楊佳珊)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Michelle 黃敏淑
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆崇德分校,MIA 高行萱
A Bell
A long time ago, there was a princess with
a yellow bell. She loves the yellow bell a great deal. But one day, the bell
fell in the lake. The princess was very sad. Luckily a frog came to help her
out. It jumped in the lake and got the bell. Then the frog gave the bell back
to the princess, making her happy once again.
學校名稱:崇德分校
學生姓名:MIA H. H. Kao (高行萱)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Ruth 顏麗君
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆自由分校,Felicia 陳妍儒
My
Breakfast
I used to eat bread and drink juice for breakfast But I don't want
to eat them today. I am going to have candies for my breakfast. I prepare some
chocolate and cookies Today is my happy candy day.
學校名稱:自由分校
學生姓名:Felicia Y. J. Chen (陳妍儒)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Li 陳麗朱
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆自由分校,Jimmy 蕭俊林
My
favorite Toy
My favorite toy is all kinds of toy cars, When I play with them, I
feel enjoyable. I received a “parking lot” for my birthday gift this year. I'm
so excited I will treasure it until I grow up.
學校名稱:自由分校
學生姓名:Jimmy C. L. Hsiao (蕭俊林)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Li 陳麗朱
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆自由分校,Jimmy 江俊毅
Where
Is Spring?
Spring is in the park. It has colorful flowers, these , birds and squirrel.
One squirrel is building a house ; another is eating nuts. White clouds and
wind are playing. The sun and swallows are playing hide and seek.
學校名稱:自由分校
學生姓名:Jimmy C. Y. Chiang (江俊毅)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Terry 劉凰儀
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Cherry 劉宸妤
MY Dream
I am dreaming on my bed. I have a happy dream. I am running in the
dream. Do you
like to run in the race? I want to be number one. Maybe I will win a
pencil box! Yay! I like my dream.
學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Cherry Ch. Y .Liu (劉宸妤)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Candice kim Borea
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 凱兒分校,Hans 李昀翰
A
Soldier
He is a soldier, he likes to climb the mountains, and he likes
fighting. Now he is standing outside, in front of the tent. He is looking at
the pretty place. Later , he is going back to the camp.
學校名稱:凱兒分校
學生姓名:Hans Y. H. Li (李昀翰)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Grace 葉明儀
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆海山分校 , Una 楊沅澄
Una
Her name is Una. Today is Una's birthday. Today is her lucky day.
She gets a beautiful, yellow bell. She goes to English class and the bell is in
her hand She has no tests today. Ring, ring, ring. She has no homework today. The
bell makes her have a nice school day when she goes home, she is so happy.
學校名稱:海山分校
學生姓名:Una (楊沅澄)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Bonnie 蔣雅馨
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆楠梓分校, Stella 王方妤
It is on Christmas and it is snowing. There is a Christmas tree next
to the fireplace. A star, a ginger men and hats are on the tree. The Santa
Claus is stocking in the chimney. The Santa Claus is stocking in the chimney.
The Snowman is smiling happily.
學校名稱:楠梓分校
學生姓名:Stella F. Y. Wang (王方妤)
就讀期數:S204
指導老師:Fran 翁韻婷
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆桃園三民分校,Jason 江承紘
A
River
I am a river. I love to take photos. I walk through forests and
cities to memorize fantastic sceneries. I love to sing songs. I sing and dance happily.
I dance under the blue sky. I sing to the ground.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Jason C. H. Chiang (江承紘)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Celina C. C. Yu余嘉嘉
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆萊斯特分校,Quiny 王堃潁
It is sunny today. Elmo swims very happily in the sea. He swims
faster and faster. He doesn't know there is a whirlpool in the deep of the sea.
He falls in the whirlpool. “Help! He shouts loudly. Cookie Monster passes by and
saves Elmo's life thank you cookie Master. Elmo says.
學校名稱:萊斯特分校
學生姓名:Quiny (王堃潁)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Cindy 沈柔忻
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆B級繪畫寫作比賽 優等作品 ☆桃園三民分校,Carey 胡語庭
Beautiful Flowers in the Ocean Corals look like trees. They are also
like flowers. They are very beautiful. Corals live in the clean ocean. The
ocean is warm and blue. There are many beautiful fish swimming there, They are
happy.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Carey (胡語庭)
就讀期數:S205
指導老師:Celina C. C. Yu 余嘉嘉
得獎殊榮:B級繪畫寫作比賽〝優等〞獎項
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